The 'elevator pitch' - 45 - English at Work helps you pitch your ideas

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Narrator: Hello and welcome to English at Work. The company's computer system

has been fixed and Anna seems to have found a new friend in Dave, the IT

support man. But her main concern now is pitching her new idea for a

plastic aubergine, to Paul the boss.

Tom: So Anna, that guy didn't really know what he was doing did he?

Anna: You mean Dave?

Tom: Davewas that his name? He had a really bad smell.

Anna: No he didn't. He's done a great job. Look everything is working so, if you

don't mind, I think we should get this pitch for Paul finished.

Denise: You'd better hurry up. Paul's taking the afternoon off to go to his biscuit

loversconvention.

Tom: Oh right. Well, we might as well leave it until tomorrow then Anna.

Anna: No Tom. There's no time like the presentI heard someone say that once

we've got to get our idea to Paul as soon as possible. Then we might

have time for a drink, or shall I ask Dave?!

Tom: No, no, you're right. Look, I'll design some pictures of the aubergine and

you get the results of our survey together, yeah?

Anna: Great.

Narrator: Well done Anna. Remember to make your pitch clear and exciting. Really

sell it with words like 'exceptional!', 'fantastic!', 'quality', 'profit',

'efficiency', and 'value for money'.

Anna: OK, I've got all that. I'm just adding some of the facts and figures from our

customer survey.

Tom: Anna, I've got the designs, they're coming off the printer now.

(Door opens)

Paul: Denise, I'm off now. Can't wait any longer for my garibaldis!

Anna: Wait Paul! I need to tell you about our new product idea.

Paul: Well, I, I, have to go. Can you tell me about it in the lift?

Anna: In the lift? Do I have to?

Paul: Sorry Anna, but that's the only time I've got.

Narrator: Right Anna. It's time for yourelevator pitch’ – an elevator is an American

word for lift. You'll need to pitch your idea quickly and concisely. You need

to tell Paul what the product is and who your market is. Then talk about

how you hope it will make money for the company. Talk about the

evidence you have that it will be successful and convince him it will really

benefit the business.

Anna: Phew, there's a lot to say in a short time but here goes.

Paul: Anna, could you just press the 0 button there, thanks.

Anna: Now Paul. Tom and I have come up with a new exciting productthe

plastic aubergine.

Paul: Oh yes?

Anna: Yes. This fantastic product will be a great addition to table decorations in

the café and restaurant market.

Paul: Will it now? Do you really think it will be a profitable addition to our plastic

portfolio?

Anna: Oh yes. Using the same plastics as our fruits, we can easily re-mould our

bananas and change the colour. We can increase efficiency but maintain

quality.

Paul: And profits?

Anna: By my calculations, we can increase profits by 20%. That's based on selling

the same quantity that we now sell of Imperial Lemons.

Paul: Hmm, 20%, really? But do you know who's going to buy this product?

Anna: I do. We've conducted a survey and already found 10 new companies who

would buy this and 27 existing customers who have shown an interest in

it

(Lift bell pings)

Anna: …and I'm confident this new product will be a huge success.

(Lift door opens)

Paul: Very impressive. You've certainly done your homework. Look, let me chew

it overprobably on a custard creamand I'll get back to you.

Anna: Thanks. (Calling out) Paul, Paulyou've forgotten your bag.

Paul: Oh yes, I'll need that. Thanks.

Narrator: Great work Anna! You convinced me but have you convinced Paul?

So Anna's done her firstelevator pitchand kept to the facts. Here's a

reminder of some of the things she said:

We've come up with an exciting new product.

This fantastic product will be a great addition to table decorations in the

café and restaurant market.

We can increase efficiency but maintain quality.

By my calculations, we can increase profits by 20%.

I'm confident this new product will be a huge success.

Tom: So, how did it go Anna?

Anna: I'm not sure. I told Paul as much as I could and I think he listened.

Tom: Good, good. So, what are you doing now?

Anna: I've got to meet someone.

Tom: Anyone I know?

Anna: No, not really.

Tom: It's Dave from IT isn't it? (To himself) What does she see in him?

Narrator: Do you want me to answer that Tom?! Anna may have fallen for the

charms of Dave but let's hope she keeps her mind on her plastic

aubergines. Join us again next time on English at Work.